Thursday, November 5, 2009

3WW (Karma, Obey, Wither): Haiku

Haven't written haiku in some time. Taking a break from the story at least for a week...


The green grapes wither;
They obey the sun’s red heat.
Raisins as karma.



They wish they'd wither,
fall to karma's losing curse.
Yankees don't obey.
Posted by TD at 10:00 PM
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4 comments:

gautami tripathy said...

Raisins as Karma..

I like that!

flames of karma

November 6, 2009 at 4:49 AM
mark said...

I found much to like in both haiku.

November 6, 2009 at 5:48 AM
Tumblewords: said...

Wow! These are great.

November 7, 2009 at 6:46 PM
Thom Gabrukiewicz said...

both are that kind of a wink-and-a-smile writing that I really appreciate.

November 8, 2009 at 5:16 PM

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