American Sentences: They are haiku-length poems that Allen Ginsburg suggested be limited to 17 syllables, like haiku in Japanese and like the Heart Sutra in Buddhism. The following two sentences are such American Sentences of 17 syllables.
The validated military rabble marched in disarray.
The rabble disarrays in the street validating the human form.
My validate rabbled on an on when I chose to go disarray.
The validated military rabble marched in disarray.
The rabble disarrays in the street validating the human form.
My validate rabbled on an on when I chose to go disarray.
6 comments:
American Sentences are fascinating. I love 'em... Good job, here!
You've done a good job with these.
Very well written
3WW: mysticism
They aren't as easy as they seem, are they? I like what you've done with the words.
Military and the government are taking a pounding with what I've read so far. Thanks. lol
These look like they'd be very challenging to do...I especially enjoyed the first one.
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