American Sentences: They are haiku-length poems that Allen Ginsburg suggested be limited to 17 syllables, like haiku in Japanese and like the Heart Sutra in Buddhism. The following two sentences are such American Sentences of 17 syllables.
I optimize efficient processes with treacherous abandon.
The treacherous but efficient man optimized his foes’ apathy.
I optimize efficient processes with treacherous abandon.
The treacherous but efficient man optimized his foes’ apathy.
6 comments:
trying to understand optimizing apathy :)
short and sweet. I like the first one.
Like the first one.
3WW: no pawns spared
I get the first one. Thanks.
btw, hope you had a good vacation.
I liked them both! I actually like your whole blog actually. Well done! -Meg
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